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Need help with my creature!

Journal Entry: Mon Apr 11, 2011, 2:22 AM
Hey guys, so I joined a challenge and I'm having a bit of trouble with my character, she is the Goddess of Creatures, please take a look at my wip and give suggestions/tips on how to improve my creation so far, here is the link:
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  I haven't been receiving any critiques from cghub so I thought you guys might be of some help? She is a little messy but I hope you guys can see what's going on. I just need fresh eyes to look at this picture :)
I will appreciate any feedback, thanks!

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:iconthe-phoenicorn:
*The-Phoenicorn Apr 14, 2011  Professional General Artist
I think you should add leaf tattoos on to the other arm. Maybe even extend them so they flow off the arms. Great so far anyway.
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:iconemiliapaw5:
*EmiliaPaw5 Apr 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :) Yeah will see if that works, I will definitely post the illustration on artfreck.com when I'm done with the changes mentioned. Sorry for not replying for a while, been so busy at work. How are you doing? I see you doing a lot of anatomy practice, I need to get into that after I'm done with this competition. Great going by the way! :)
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:iconrmjmyburgh:
Mood: Wow! ~RMJMYBURGH Apr 13, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
i would maybe look as sum mythical references to LILITH.
Biblically she was know as the mother and queen of all creatures.
but otherwise looking really good - maybe a bit more menacing facial expression.
also maybe reference the DARK ELDAR of the war hammer 40k game.
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:iconemiliapaw5:
*EmiliaPaw5 Apr 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :) I will look into that. Can you post me a link to how the dark eldar looks like? I googled it but there is too many different characters that come up, not sure which one she/he is, if you don't mind that is :)
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:iconrmjmyburgh:
~RMJMYBURGH Apr 14, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
[link]

sum references there

Lelith Hesperax - powerfull dark eldar warrior, female, hair contains blades, mystic, graceful and elegant, one of the most skilled killers of dark eldar race.
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:iconemiliapaw5:
*EmiliaPaw5 Apr 20, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, she looks interesting
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:iconmrshendersonpresents:
She's wonderful!

Maybe some dragon scales covering the torso instead of the armour/clothing.... ? She would seem more nude and creature-like that way but it could be reasoned the scales would be as tough as armour so would offer her protection too...

Good luck with finishing her, we look forward to the end result! xxx
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:iconemiliapaw5:
*EmiliaPaw5 Apr 12, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :) I will definitely experiment with this idea
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:iconmrshendersonpresents:
Ooo yipee! Enjoy! :) xxx
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:iconmiikey116:
~Miikey116 Apr 11, 2011   Digital Artist
cant wait to see the final result...
I think It would be cooler if the whole outfit was made of creatures only
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